NOTE2: Elizabeth = Lizze
It all started when Elizabeth, David, Daisy, and Suzie on the roof of a house, pitch-black. Trying for their best to stay warm while wasting time because the water's flowing much higher and faster that before. At least one foot per minute. Now, David has an idea that the leftover pieces in the house to create a raft and float all the way to safety. They also needed some tools if they could even work on making a model. Using some skill, patience, and a little bit of teamwork, they've collected the tools and some wood up to the roof. Now what are they going to build?
Elizabeth is developing leadership because of how she took control over David and convinced him that fighting over something means wasting something else overtime. What David developed is using ideas to help the team. He used the idea of what his father didn't finish or made flaws of to create something else that makes them safe and sound. Even though everyone used their teamwork to help the group, Suzie developed some teamwork. All the time she wants to ask if she could help but what David and Elizabeth are doing are big people jobs, but Elizabeth asked her if she could help, and she did.
There are some challenges that could challenge tons of defying challengers to challenge this challenge. One thing is that diving in cold water makes less time breathing in water. David was very cold and was shivering after the swim. Everyone feels the cold drifting around us. Another challenge is going through an obby under pressure. It means that the object (Pole) that you get blocked in while the time (Flood) keeps rising, you get pressure and worry that you won't make it.
This might be the climax of the story because the hill might be at least at the top of the plot. After the building of the raft, I think that we will swoop down over "Plot Hill." My prediction is that the raft will be finished and they will be very safe while the whole house will be flooded.
It all started when Elizabeth, David, Daisy, and Suzie on the roof of a house, pitch-black. Trying for their best to stay warm while wasting time because the water's flowing much higher and faster that before. At least one foot per minute. Now, David has an idea that the leftover pieces in the house to create a raft and float all the way to safety. They also needed some tools if they could even work on making a model. Using some skill, patience, and a little bit of teamwork, they've collected the tools and some wood up to the roof. Now what are they going to build?
Elizabeth is developing leadership because of how she took control over David and convinced him that fighting over something means wasting something else overtime. What David developed is using ideas to help the team. He used the idea of what his father didn't finish or made flaws of to create something else that makes them safe and sound. Even though everyone used their teamwork to help the group, Suzie developed some teamwork. All the time she wants to ask if she could help but what David and Elizabeth are doing are big people jobs, but Elizabeth asked her if she could help, and she did.
There are some challenges that could challenge tons of defying challengers to challenge this challenge. One thing is that diving in cold water makes less time breathing in water. David was very cold and was shivering after the swim. Everyone feels the cold drifting around us. Another challenge is going through an obby under pressure. It means that the object (Pole) that you get blocked in while the time (Flood) keeps rising, you get pressure and worry that you won't make it.
This might be the climax of the story because the hill might be at least at the top of the plot. After the building of the raft, I think that we will swoop down over "Plot Hill." My prediction is that the raft will be finished and they will be very safe while the whole house will be flooded.
